Members Poetry and Writing

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  1. Up On the Governor

    Up On the Governor Well-Known Member

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    I was inspired by www.writeaprisoner.com to write an anonymous love poem:


    My love shall extend

    Emanating from my heart,

    Through those iron bars,

    and unto your arms

    The evidence was meager,

    for your release I am eager

    You should escape...

    Like in Shawshank Redemption

    For you, the state should make an exception

    After all, that &$%@# had it coming

    For callin up on yo man's phone.
     
  2. liberalminority

    liberalminority Well-Known Member

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    roses are red

    violets are blue

    sugar is sweet

    and so am i.
     
  3. catalinacat

    catalinacat Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    A Song

    The sweet-voiced quetzal there, ruling the earth, has intoxicated my soul.

    I am like the quetzal bird, I am created in the one and only God; I sing sweet songs among the flowers; I chant songs and rejoice in my heart.

    The fuming dewdrops from the flowers in the fields intoxicate my soul.

    I grieve to myself that ever this dwelling on earth should end.

    I foresaw, being a Mexican, that our rule began to be destroyed, I went forth weeping that it was to bow down and to be destroyed.

    Let me not be angry that the grandeur of Mexico is to be destroyed.

    The smoking stars gather against it: the one who cares for flowers is about to be destroyed.

    He who cared for books wept, he wept for the beginning of the destruction.



    Hungry Coyote
     
  4. leftysergeant

    leftysergeant New Member

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    The Debtor's Rubayat

    You win your daily bread by usery
    Of commerce you have made a mockery
    Interest is a noose that you can tighten
    You lead your neighbor into slavery

    Debt has tremendous power to frighten
    In our night that the sun cannot brighten
    What will we not do in desperation
    It leads us to sin our load to lighten

    Working men face certain devastation
    Illness brings the threat of prostration
    We cannot survive the loss of wages
    Our goods are subject to confiscation

    Your deeds are inscribed on divine pages
    God shall read them at the End of Ages
    You shall drink your molten gold treasurey
    When souls are measured and hell's flame rages.
     
  5. Libhater

    Libhater Well-Known Member

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    Men and women serving with honor
    Army Navy Airforce and the Corp

    Combat soldiers the battle of rage
    Unleashing emotions locked in a cage

    Humilities and sarcasams all endure
    Illnesses and scars cannot cure

    Hopefullness and bliss not so sure
    One day at a time anything but pure

    Singing a song acting a play
    Moments of happiness 'Oh what a day

    Hurts and anxieties will not sway
    Into the future shades of gray

    Poem is blue do not dismay
    Every day still time to pray

    Libhater
     
  6. MisLed

    MisLed New Member

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    MisLed originals.

    A Gardener's Plea by MisLed

    Tell me
    Please.
    Why don't
    Bugs eat weeds?

    For the Jack-Attack, by MisLed

    You got boogies??
    Let me see.
    Don't you put
    That boogie on me.
     
  7. Herkdriver

    Herkdriver New Member

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    Not my poem, but I always liked this...Stella was a terrified British teenager enduring the bombing of London during WWII.

    'The War'

    by Stella Richardson, written at age 16

    The sun begins to sink in the sky,
    as the evening approaches.

    The sudden darkness brings the change; sirens wail.
    People run for shelter. Peace is lost.

    Then the waiting begins.
    Life or death? Who can know?
     
  8. leftysergeant

    leftysergeant New Member

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    The Weapon

    He is the ultimate weapon,
    Formed of flesh and stell
    Neither part useful alone.

    The desert sand abrades the steel
    It jams the bolt and trigger,
    At stand down clean it well.

    Remove the sand and residue,
    Oil it, inspect for wear,
    Craddle it, protect it from harm.

    The horror of war abrades the flesh,
    Burdens the heart, twists the soul.
    At stand doiwn, this needs care, too.
     
  9. Libhater

    Libhater Well-Known Member

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    Every issuse strained,
    nothing but pain;

    child abuse, emotional scars,
    empty relationships, lonely bars,

    struggling inner self,
    produce significant wealth,

    vision of hope,
    near end of a rope,

    tragedies ago,
    peace do not know,

    enlightenment today,
    now gone astray,

    Nice lay today,
    not quite risque,

    learn to love,
    then take a shove,

    soak the liver,
    only to shiver,

    down and out,
    but never pout,

    despite the chagrin,
    Always a grin.
     
  10. leftysergeant

    leftysergeant New Member

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    Futility

    How vast must it be that repetoire of works not kissed by the Muse?
    All the babbling and maundering attempts at artful wittiness,
    Erato unmoved by the heads pounding against a solid block.
     
  11. Viv

    Viv Banned by Request

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    [FONT=&quot]
    If you are not here...
    this world has no stars
    no moon and no sea to adore
    no beauty, no joy and no sweet love of life
    and no sparkling dawn as before
    The day now is endless
    The night is dead black,
    not silver-edged, scented and soft
    and the light which invades me is killing and cruel
    in blank eyes to a soul cold and lost.
    There is no flaming heat
    and no scintillant pulse
    soaring over the sound of your voice
    No warmth and no hope
    and no risking of all
    to be close to the love of my choice
    Confusion is born from a tormented heart
    once afire with a love yet to be
    In this world it is dark and as bare as your heart
    of real love. Nothing holds you to me[/FONT]
     
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  12. leftysergeant

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    Bringing the Djinn to Heel
    (A meditation on PTSD)

    Where did it come from, this decietful djinn?
    Why does it sit beisde you like Faust's black poodle?
    Can't it see you are trying to write?

    It offers to fetch you something from your past,
    Something that will inspire your pen
    Perhaps some forgotten war souvenier.

    It still remembers each path you trod,
    The secret stashes you left behind,
    And things you didn't know you had dropped.

    But some of them have a stench about them.
    You buried them long ago for good reason.
    Some things are best left where you need not see them.

    Better you should teach it to dance for you,
    Make it retell your history with a smile,
    Emphasize the brighter moments.

    Some day you will learn to rid youreself of it.
    Soon or late, you must pronounce the charm.
    Face it and say "Bism Allah, BEGONE."
     
  13. Foolardi

    Foolardi Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    Aaahoo !
    I heard a knock on my brain
    Aaahoo!
    It was late and I better not tell
    Aaahoo!
    The kitchen was closed
    And I saw a little old lady
    Aaahoo !
    Better not tell
    Better to stay hairy handed
    Aaahoo !
    Saw a Werewolf ... Aaahoo!
    Drinkin' a Pina Colada
    And his hair was perfect.
    Aaahoo !
    Like to meet his Mom
    To live unseen,unknown
    that is the question
    Aaahoo !
    Better to Feel the damp
    of the river fog,
    The bark of a Farmer's dog
    The twitter of birds,
    over meadows brown.
    Than the infernal ... Aaahoo!
    As Mama ... came a runnin'
    Aaahoo!
    Oh! Susanna
    Don't you Cry
     
  14. Foolardi

    Foolardi Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    I saw Obama with a Chineese menu in his hand
    Aaahoo!
    Werewolves of Washington
    Ya hear Howlin' around yer kitchen door
    better not let him In
    Aaahoo !

    no need to meet his tailor
    even Lon Chaney made a face
    Aaahoo !
    Werewolves of Washington
    Better watch out,
    the big-headed Gent
    Rips yer heart out
    Breitbart unsent ?
    Aaahooooo ...
    Saw Obama walking with
    Hisself ... late last night
    had a pina colada in his paw
    what a sight !
    Aaahooo !
    Ran amuck then took a flight
    late last night
    Aaahoo .. Werewolves of Washington
     
  15. leftysergeant

    leftysergeant New Member

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    Glitch

    The words came out of some dark place
    Hobbling and arthritic as the fingers typing
    Then a keystroke exiled them to a circle of black.

    I wanted to share them with my friends
    A few dark thoughts on common demons
    Let's set them on the berm for target practice.

    But the disc has swallowed them, secreted them
    Taken them away beyond my recall
    They passed away leaving no mark or image.

    Or perhaps, I am not as ready as I thought.
    Perhaps I am not so cool as I thought,
    Nor so ready to look at the wreckage in the mirror.
     
  16. catalinacat

    catalinacat Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    I should have know you were a poet since I like your music choices.:)
     
  17. SpotsCat

    SpotsCat New Member Past Donor

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    I wrote and published this about ten years ago over at an automotive website I used to be affiliated with --

    "RICED OUT NEON" (sung to the tune of 'Hot Rod Lincoln')

    Have you heard the story of the riced-out race,
    where the Nissan's and Honda's were settin' the pace?
    That story is true. And I'm sad to say,
    there was even a fool with a riced Hyundai!

    I got a Plymouth Neon, it looks really slick.
    A chameleon paint job makes it look trick!
    Alteeza's and a fart-can, but that ain't all...
    I got a wing on the back, four feet tall!

    Pulled of my 'hood early one night,
    the windshield nozzles shinin', blue and bright.
    Head to the freeway, get on I-10,
    drive to LA, go cruisin' again.

    All of a sudden, in the blink of an eye...
    an SUV passed us by!
    My friends in the back said, "What the f**k?
    You just got smoked by a Cadillac truck!"

    They said, "Yo' man, wassup with that?
    That sh*t ain't right, we thought you was phat!"
    "Go catch that Caddy, and show 'em who's boss!
    Or does this piece of sh*t, only run on NOS?"

    I don't take that crap, not while I'm alive,
    so I dropped that Neon into overdrive!
    Stomped my foot, mashed the gas to the floor,
    my speedometer topped out at eighty-four!

    Smoke was coming outta the back,
    as I started to gain on the Cadillac!
    Knew I could catch 'em, and slip right past.
    Neon don't need NOS, just premium gas!

    Motor was whining, man what a ride!
    Neon and Caddy, side by side!
    I yelled "Look out Bee-yatch! Hang up your cell phone!"
    And the Caddy pulled over, and left us alone!

    Subwoofer in the trunk was really thumpin',
    my posse in the back started jumpin'!
    Looked out the back, and no one smiled...
    the cops pulled us over - we've been profiled!

    They arrested me, and threw me in jail.
    Called my parents to post my bail.
    My Pop said "Son, I'm gonna start sniffin' Freon...
    if you don't stop drivin' that RICED...OUT...NEON!!
     
  18. leftysergeant

    leftysergeant New Member

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    Frustrated Tanka

    Disoriented
    Poet stares into the haze
    His Muse out to lunch
    Quacking, woofing pointlessly
    Another thought goes nowhere.
     
  19. leftysergeant

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    This is for you.

    My physical eye looks outward upon a cold fog-bound landscape
    My mind's eye sees a sunnier climate while my ears hear songs of distant lands
    With pen and paper I build a vessel to take me to that place.
     
  20. B.Larset

    B.Larset Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    Behold, a heart foists in trial an error! The harder the better and the sooner the darer! Take shape as I will, not from my hand; but somewhere deep as my soul shall command, of love and fortune through waves of trials in time marked by the sublime. In the depths of my sorrow I find strength, and it is there that I borrow the will for the morrow.

    Oh’ pearl nest in these carvings etched here by the hunger of my natures longing
    Your beauty lists the shadows secrets giving glimpses into the light of tomorrows reaches. Rest here in this place, while I lose the days troubles, and share your beauty’s grace.

    This moment is the bitter silence I must not face. So in works comfort a place for us I make. Formed perfect and true a natural wonder who’s visions appear, then give loan to my beings sight and its minds flight. Owing all to what seldom; but immortal love can right. While in sleep I fight what is cast into my life.

    Love grows and both dies before my eyes. Yet I taste the tears from those lost and hear their cries. So I ask of providence kneeling, why? As I reason maybe I will find : Grief’s irritating grind helps us weather these mortal storms of earthly design. Thereby making us pearls for use by the divine.
     
  21. liberalminority

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    roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, but not as sweet as i.
     
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    PoliticalForum Administrator Staff Member

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    Stickied for all who haven't seen this thread!
     
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    B.Larset Well-Known Member Past Donor

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    Thanks.
     
  24. Spade115

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    I used to write short stories and poems in school (By todays standards some stories would be classified "Terroristic Threats" lol)

    Did this now, Bored at work.

    The bell rang
    Heading to class
    Walking with friends
    Missing the time spent
    Waiting in class
    Playing cards

    Now grown up
    I have a job
    Staring at a screen
    My eyes are red
    Deadlines due

    Missing the time I spent
    Playing cards
    Shooting pool

    Payments due
    Need money

    Have a family
    Lost some friends

    Missing the time when I sat
    waiting for the bell
    waiting for school to end
    waiting to leave to go shoot pool
    have fun with friends
     
  25. Spade115

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    I read the poem of the old soldier and it got me teary eyed and thinking of family.
    Reminded me of my cousin who took his life two years ago now..He would of been 27 this year.

    Death comes to all
    Fair
    Old or younge
    woman or man

    Life is pain
    Love is bliss
    Death comes to all

    Who wait for it
    Who follow it
    Who worship it

    Death will come
    To silence all
    For those who happen upon it
    Death is gentle

    For those who call upon it
    Death is thoughtful

    For those who are snuck up by it
    Death is violent and tormentful

    My familys died
    My friends have passed
    Death is fair
    Man or woman
     

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